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Gresh
16-06-2008, 00:15
Over visiting a mate, and he took me to the Swan Sanctuary at Worcester (a fishing free part of the Severn). I was most interested in getting pictures of the Cathedral, but stopped to take some of the swans. I quite like this one, so I leave it to your constructive critisism.

http://project110.co.uk/gallery/gal/Worcester%20-%20June%202008/150608%20(49).jpg

EdinburghGary
16-06-2008, 14:36
Hi again! This time I would have liked to see the swan looking at you, and for his feathers to be overall brighter, but without blowing or loosing the detail. The very bright light shining onto the road etc behind the swan is off putting, and perhaps the crop is too tight, maybe off centre it.


By the way I should add, I am a noice and most of my shots are mince, so take my comments with a pinch of salt! :)

Gresh
16-06-2008, 19:10
Yuh, I'm a novice too, so any critisism is welcomed, you have to take great pics to recognise what you dislike or like in a picture.