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Lateralus
28-06-2008, 00:02
:D1 thought i'd make things right with some rusty framework:Dhttp://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0953-1-1-1.jpg
2
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0954-1-1.jpg
3
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0943-1-1-2.jpg
4
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0945-1-1.jpg
5
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0943-1-2.jpg
6
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0949-1-2.jpg
7
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn91/ccfaucher/HPIM0947-1-1.jpg

c&c:)

rh1944
28-06-2008, 05:47
if I had to say one thing to you it owuld be use the rule of thirds for your composition. This would instantly improve lots of your photos.

Somehow your colours usually seem a but washed out, so some sort of post prod would help.

You put in lots of effort and enthusiasm so you're bound to get better.

rh1944
28-06-2008, 07:20
In this example, I have borrowed your #4 and I have put the horizon at the lower third. I think this improves the composition. I have cropped it to a standard aspect ratio 8 by 6 which I think improves the shot as you lose things on the left which aren't adding much value. I have also removed the noise which has made it softer, unfortunately.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3064/2617090579_f76538528c_o.jpg

I think this is better, but it was all in your shot.

Lateralus
28-06-2008, 12:54
hmm-i do like it :clap:
thx for the advice too,rh:)
also, these are typical of what you see from a digital camera= )

Matt Sayle
28-06-2008, 18:23
You need better equipmeant ASAP. Nice shots.

Lateralus
28-06-2008, 20:58
You need better equipmeant ASAP. Nice shots.

ty-yup-hate this camera:D