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samcox89
09-07-2008, 14:53
Hey, i've finally got all of my gear through the post and set to take some portraits. Please let me know what you think. Thanks a million.



http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9469big.jpg
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9567big.jpg
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9470big.jpg

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9496big.jpg
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9549big.jpg
EdinburghGary
09-07-2008, 14:56
I think she is lovely :D

Nice shots!
marko400d
09-07-2008, 15:27
sorry not crazy keen on these images. they look a bit harsh for my rose tinted spectacles, but iv'e had a look at your website and theres some really really good photo's there. i particularly like the ice cream shot!
samcox89
09-07-2008, 15:32
sorry not crazy keen on these images. they look a bit harsh for my rose tinted spectacles, but iv'e had a look at your website and theres some really really good photo's there. i particularly like the ice cream shot!

Thanks for your view. I think i was going for the kinda harsh look with the location I had. I appreciate what your saying though.
Betty
09-07-2008, 15:38
I have to agree with marko400d, they are a bit harsh for my liking too, but then I agree with Gary... gorgeous model you have! The first would be the best, but try a different crop :)
rh1944
09-07-2008, 15:44
I do like the model and prefer the first shot to the others. In my grumpy old man mode, I don't like seeing all the underwear peeking out of her tops. That's probably a very old fashioned view.
Graphic-Addict
09-07-2008, 16:13
Because as you say you are going for the harsher type shot - how about trying some in B&W ?:)
Aimee K
09-07-2008, 16:17
I actually like number 4 the best!
samcox89
09-07-2008, 16:25
I might try some b&w ones later.. gotta shot something else later tonight. It was mainly a lighting test and experimenting with different ways of lighting i.e. clamshell ect.. and i got my nice new skyports which worked a charm.

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j55/samcox89/IMG_9494.jpg

I actually like number 4 the best!

Thanks, i put one sb26 behind her which made her have a white glow around.