High School Prom

[John Lindsay]

I was asked by Lauren, the girl in the blue dress to do photo's before she left her house for her High School Prom. So here they are:

Let me know what you think!

1.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3156/2655241451_23c8a5757f_o.jpg

2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3287/2656067512_ccc3dd81ab_o.jpg

3.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2313/2656067882_4d075d3ea1_o.jpg

4.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3220/2655242395_52ea38d5b1_o.jpg

5.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3207/2655242951_35e14d0b4e_o.jpg

6.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3123/2655243167_35c0b426ea_o.jpg


Lauren was very happy with the photos and I am too, just wanting to see what other people think, and how they could be improved if possible.



John

[ivortripod]

Nice expressions but get rid of the telegraph/electric pole
Cheers.:thumbs:
PS: Excellent tonal range as well!

[rh1944]

#2 is the best for me. I think it has better composition than the others.

[John Lindsay]

Wondered if the telegraph pole would be noticed!

I never noticed it at the time, but it's annoyed me ever since!


Thanks ivortripod!


I'll post an edit up later with the pole removed, see what you think.



John

[Betty]

Lauren was very happy with the photos and I am too

Then there you go, thats all that matters :)

I agree about the pole, and the distracting backgrounds, but thats purely from a tog POV, all Lauren wants are some memories of the night, and you've nailed it :thumbs:

[ivortripod]

Pleasure. :)
[I probably won't be on line again today, but pole-less is the way to go!]

[Betty]

I did a prom in May on one of the lads back gardens, the lawn was covered in bread for the birds, the washing line was left up etc etc, amazing what the clone stamp/healing brush can do :)

[vmlopes]

Crop out the old woman in #3


Victor