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Forgot to mention - I was going for the style of an entry in a museum guide!
Phil
Phil, this is very poignant and a bit different from some of the other war themed ones which have been gravestone/graveyards.
Every year on November 11th, my Mum used to get out her brothers medals and have a good cry, so medals mean a lot to me. It's a really good take on the theme.
I also like the second close up shot of the medal. IMHO that makes the photo. You can see so much detail on it which you cannot make out on the main image.
Well done this week
Jenny
That was exactly what I thought about it when I saw it.
. . . and it really does look good enough to be part of a museum guide. All the elements are perfectly balanced - and the detail in the medal close-up is very sharp.
Phil, the idea is sound as is the composition, but there seems to be some technicalities that need sorting out.
I am not sure if they are reflections or not but..
Across the top of the image and running down towards the hinge are very dark lines, also to the right there are fainter lines on the background. Because you mention "Museum Guide" I feel that the image should be free of any distractions such as these. Perhaps in this case the clone tool could be your friend
Allan
I like it Phil, and my first thought was something out of a guide book so I reckon it worked.
Hi Phil,
I really like the subject choice, and colour picking the lettering to match the medal is a nice pp touch that's worked.
I'm with Allan though on the background. My first impression was that it looked like it was floating because of the glass table and "something" in the background. Like you said, a product shot for a catalogue would have a plain background.
Seems like you went to a lot of effort this week though, and I do like teh overal final image.
Well done!
Ian.
Stare.... mean and moody street shot, just the whites of the eyes seem alittle too much, I keep thinking of Stargate
Peace.....would be a great shot but the water mark is a little too intrusive though as it crosses the bottom of the medal
your shot for stare is fantastic.. am memerised by his eyes.. great attitude too.. top notch
like the medal, nicely composed, pin sharp.. I dont mind the reflections, agree that they add some depth to the shot
Peace: I like the effect you've created and it certainly fits the theme. Soomebody gave a talk to our family history society recently on medals and I had no idea how fascinating they can be and how much they tell not just a story of a conflict but also of a personal journey.
As to the background, I like the effect. My only tiny niggle would be that the ribbon looks a tad over exposed - but it might just be my screen.
Another good week, Phil.
Jean
This fits the subject really well. I really like the lighting and composition of this, and the way you have put it all together. Personally I rather like the textured background. Presumably the medal ribbons have faded with age.
The left edge of the medal on the right seems a bit soft, so that it sits rather uneasily on the surface of the image, if you see what I mean, but that is a very minor niggle...
Really short of ideas this week, but music & hi-fi is definitely one of my major interests and the high-quality interconnects to squeeze the last bit of performance out of it are definitely an indulgence.
Is it a day late because you had to wait until your wife was asleep to use the "background" Phil ?
It certainly is an indulgence and looks good on black.
I can't help thinking the plugs should have been in the foreground. The OOF cable at the front keeps drawing my eye to it.
Andy
I thought the indulgence reference was to the precious metals in it until I read that, so it fits on 2 levels for me.
Definitely worth clicking to view on black, the purple stands out brilliantly and the plugs are absolutely pin sharp. Great lighting and reflections in there.
Like Andy though, I'm not entirely convinced by the oof cable in the foreground - it looks OK, but I can't help feeling that there's a far better than "OK" composition in there somewhere. Either arranging the cable differently or a wider DoF
Hi Phil, that's an interesting indulgence. I was expecting a whisky shot!
I love the colours in this shot, but agree with the others about the OOF cable at the front. I feel that it may be better the other way round - plugs at the front, cable at the back?
Jenny
Hi Phil, love the purple and is very nice with the black background (I have a piece of black carpet you can borrow next time ) I like the dare to be different approach, I just wonder if maybe a little less OOFness might be less distracting and so make it work better keeping it this way around......fantastic sharpness on the plugs
I suspended it from a thread against my wife's black dress (lying on the floor - just as well she was asleep!)
A different indulgence from all the food pics. Definitely an indulgence. The gold colour looks good but I dont like all that oof cable.
I like it Phil, and it's an interesting interpretation of the theme.
Maybe it would have looked better framed against the thin ice you were stood on when you took the shot?
Brave man
Ian.
I like it too Phil, I agree with Ian above that its an interesting take on the theme. It does look better against the black too. It could almost be a product shot, maybe with slightly more dof to bring the other plug into focus as the cable ends are the more important aspects. I like the vibrant colour too. Iain
Phil, I think that's great, given what's in it, that's defo an indulgent cable ... I think having the oof purple in the foreground works ok, although having both plugs in the DOF, would I think, have helped it a bit more. I was wondering how you'd got the seperation from the black...