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Old 09-02-2012, 19:37   #61
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Hiya Neil, a great set since my last visit. Good to see it is going well. Really like number 28, that is an excellent idea.
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Old 09-02-2012, 19:57   #62
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Ace this, i wish i had this much imagination lol keep up the good work
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Old 10-02-2012, 14:50   #63
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Loving these shots!!

No 13 reminds me of this Queen album cover

http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=que...0&tx=61&ty=114
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Old 10-02-2012, 20:44 Thread Starter   #64
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LOL, looks like a tepee. I'd like to see the top of the smoke and there appears to be a wisp of white smoke in front of the top of the yellow pencil.

Not easy is it

Plenty more ideas though....
This was my fav of the smoke shots, but ye, I wish I'd got the smoke in the top!

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Not seen the last few, brilliant, well explored just gotta hand it to you Neil
More with the water over the weekend!

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Good work Neil

I really like your ideas and the simplicity of the shots (note I didn't say easy! )

Looking forward to seeing it through to 101.
Thanks Adrian
I hope I get there for you!

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Enjoying this project of yours immensely Neil and from the latest efforts I have selected the random effect of #27 as my favourite
Thanks Mal.
Things are slowing a little bit, but not out yet!

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#25 is great. I like how you have got the shadows aswell as the pencils.
The shadows certainly give it a little something
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Old 10-02-2012, 20:46 Thread Starter   #65
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Hiya Neil, a great set since my last visit. Good to see it is going well. Really like number 28, that is an excellent idea.
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Ace this, i wish i had this much imagination lol keep up the good work
I hope I have enough, got a long way to go yet!

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Loving these shots!!

No 13 reminds me of this Queen album cover

http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=que...0&tx=61&ty=114
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Thanks Mick, everyone has noted that about that shot.
I didn't see it at first.
I may have to look at more albums if I get stuck!
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Old 11-02-2012, 11:19 Thread Starter   #66
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Managed to think up a few more compositions without getting the water out!
Water fun will have to be tomorrow!!

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Old 11-02-2012, 13:40   #67
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Those last set are stunning really inspiring!
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Old 11-02-2012, 13:43   #68
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36 is amazing, i was bored on thursday and the weather was rubbish and thought id have a go but really could do anything like what you have achieved!
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Old 13-02-2012, 18:47   #69
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HI matey....good to see you're still going.......

#32......love the shape you've created , must have taken a while
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#32 is a cracker, really nice flowing lines. I rotated my laptop clockwise 90 degrees and angled it down so I was looking across the pencils...liked it. **I won't mention the lower left **

#36 is also another great idea. I really like the depth, colours and exposure of this one. Being very picky the top layer is slightly OOF, unless that's what you were after.

Keep it up and I can see sssooo many more ideas here.

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Old 13-02-2012, 23:19   #71
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neil - a good set - I like #32, 35 and 36 especially
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Old 18-02-2012, 21:56   #72
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#28 is great.
Brilliant idea and well executed.
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Top marks for creativity from me for #32
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Old 20-02-2012, 11:46 Thread Starter   #74
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Thanks for all the latest comments.
I realise it's been over a week since a new image was posted, and it may be another week yet, but the challenge is still on and once work/ family permit I will get around to doing some more shots.

Thanks everyone.
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Old 25-02-2012, 23:29 Thread Starter   #75
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Numbers 38 to 43

It's been a couple of weeks since my last shots, mainly due to a few days hols and work!
Hopefully I'll get a few more done tomorrow, but until then hopefully these will please.

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Thanks for looking and feel free to C&C

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Old 26-02-2012, 08:29   #76
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Great idea. Really nice collection.

A couple things. #6 doesn't have a tip that is in focus, just the edge of the first pencil. Also as I look through them, I keep being drawn to the quality of the pencils rather than the composition. Some tips are quite shabby. I might have used a better quality pencil with less imperfections if I was to invest this much time in the project.
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Old 26-02-2012, 19:19 Thread Starter   #77
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Great idea. Really nice collection.

A couple things. #6 doesn't have a tip that is in focus, just the edge of the first pencil. Also as I look through them, I keep being drawn to the quality of the pencils rather than the composition. Some tips are quite shabby. I might have used a better quality pencil with less imperfections if I was to invest this much time in the project.
One of the things I like about the project is tat it's being done with cheap props, 45p per pack of pencils!

I want to focus on the different compositions, lighting etc., but I take your point.
If any really catch my eye when I finish, I may invest in a quality set of pencils and do a reshoot.

Thanks for looking, and the comments.
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Old 26-02-2012, 19:22   #78
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excellent shots- may even try something similar as it'l no doubt help with composition practise etc (my weakness)
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Old 26-02-2012, 19:59 Thread Starter   #79
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Shots 44 to 49

I eventually got around to trying our the shot I saw in a magazine that gave me some inspiration for this - submersing the pencils in sparkling water!

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Old 26-02-2012, 20:02 Thread Starter   #80
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Numbers 50 & 51 - Half way there!

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Old 26-02-2012, 20:06   #81
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Another fab set of shot Neil well done on the half way point your doing great have you added glycerine to the water on #50 and 51
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Old 26-02-2012, 20:11 Thread Starter   #82
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excellent shots- may even try something similar as it'l no doubt help with composition practise etc (my weakness)
Thanks for looking Terry.
It's a great way to get you thinking.


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Another fab set of shot Neil well done on the half way point your doing great have you added glycerine to the water on #50 and 51
Thanks Dave,

No glycerine in the water, just a cheap bottle of sparkling water.
I've got the glycerine, just trying to think on how to use it!
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I do love this! Keep up the good work
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Don't take this the wrong way but as fantastic as the images are, i haven't seen 101 different images, i have seen some different lighting set ups, sometimes repeated, sometimes the orientation of the pencils seems repeated but under different lighting.
Please don't get the wrong idea, i actually like all the images but i don't see 50odd different images just different sets
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Old 26-02-2012, 23:35   #85
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More great shots - #46 grabbed my attention (in the right way!)
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Don't take this the wrong way but as fantastic as the images are, i haven't seen 101 different images, i have seen some different lighting set ups, sometimes repeated, sometimes the orientation of the pencils seems repeated but under different lighting.
Please don't get the wrong idea, i actually like all the images but i don't see 50odd different images just different sets
Not taken the wrong way at all.
I've thought a similar thing myself about a few of them.
For me though, so long as something has changed in the composition or direction of light, then I'm happy things have changed.

From the last two, I had loads which had differences from the fact I shot the water at different stages of dropping.
Many of the pictures I liked, but the set up hadn't changed so I only went with one.

One aspect that I wont be doing is taking te pictures outside.
On ereason for doing the project is that I'm not getting much time from work or family to get out with the camera, so th eproject is mainly restricted to the house. That said, I may take the pencils out for day trips once hit 101.

Thanks for looking, and I'm sure I'll come up with otherthings now you've confirmed some of my own thoughts so do pop in again and let me know how I do

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More great shots - #46 grabbed my attention (in the right way!)
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I do love this! Keep up the good work
Will do Alex, thanks for looking
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Hi matey....glad to see the inspiration still flowing

Love the reflection shots , particularly #40...great lighting ....much pp done to those ? only asking as green eyed at how perfect the BG's are

Liking the bubbles as well

I had a go with glycerine....nightmare , much patience needed to catch the droplet before it fall & getting it in just the right place to catch the reflection of the BG......
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Old 28-02-2012, 20:14 Thread Starter   #88
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Hi matey....glad to see the inspiration still flowing

Love the reflection shots , particularly #40...great lighting ....much pp done to those ? only asking as green eyed at how perfect the BG's are

Liking the bubbles as well

I had a go with glycerine....nightmare , much patience needed to catch the droplet before it fall & getting it in just the right place to catch the reflection of the BG......
Mainly the only PP is a tweak of levels, contrast and sometimes a colour boost, but I'm getting there on the BG being black or white SOC. One big plus will be getting a second flash for the white BG shots.

I did remove some bubbles from the white BG shots as I felt they clutter the image a little.

Not played with the glycerine yet, may give it a go at the weekend.
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Just found this thread. Great idea and brilliant images.

I admire your perseverance

(and obviously your camera skills )
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45 and 49 I really like.
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