Critique : Clachnaharry - Caledonian Canal

windrunner · 04-03-2013, 19:14

A couple from Saturday night down at the mouth of the Canal.

1. 10 stopper

Clachnaharry - Caledonian Canal by Michael~Ashley, on Flickr

2. Close up

Clachnaharry - Scottish Highlands by Michael~Ashley, on Flickr

mrtoad · 05-03-2013, 13:47

i am not keen on the dynamic middle composition...
your no 2 is better except for the bulbous part of the handrail which is hugging all the dof
better with it out and a more deeper shot in focus
cheers
geof

04-03-2013, 19:14	#1
windrunner Been here a while Real name : Michael Location: Scottish Highlands Posts: 347 Camera: Nikon D7000	Clachnaharry - Caledonian Canal A couple from Saturday night down at the mouth of the Canal. 1. 10 stopper Clachnaharry - Caledonian Canal by Michael~Ashley, on Flickr 2. Close up Clachnaharry - Scottish Highlands by Michael~Ashley, on Flickr

05-03-2013, 13:47	#2
mrtoad Growing roots Real name : Geof Location: southwest cornwall Posts: 11,182 Camera: Lumix G1 micro 4/3	i am not keen on the dynamic middle composition... your no 2 is better except for the bulbous part of the handrail which is hugging all the dof better with it out and a more deeper shot in focus cheers geof __________________ Lumix G1 - 14-45 Zoom Lumix FZ7 - 12x Zoom “Would I were with him, wheresome'er he is, either in heaven or in hell ...Henry V