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Old 09-10-2010, 19:24   #1
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Kestral in flight - Picture added

Have played a little bit with in PS to slightly desaturate the BG. What do you think



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Old 09-10-2010, 19:34   #2
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Love the kestral, not so sure about the background.
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Old 09-10-2010, 19:40   #3
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Love the kestral, not so sure about the background.


cracking shot though
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Old 09-10-2010, 19:41   #4
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nice kestral like neil b says not sure about the background just does not look right...
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Old 09-10-2010, 19:48   #5
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It's a good capture, especially against the ground, but the image has a green hue to it.
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Old 09-10-2010, 20:07   #6
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The kestrel is super but the background seems to have 2 distinct halves
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Old 09-10-2010, 20:24 Thread Starter   #7
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Love the kestral, not so sure about the background.
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cracking shot though
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nice kestral like neil b says not sure about the background just does not look right...
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It's a good capture, especially against the ground, but the image has a green hue to it.
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The kestrel is super but the background seems to have 2 distinct halves
Thanks everyone , perhaps I should leave PS alone
I have to agree, your right, I have added the original picture now, any thoughts please
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Good BIF shot Trev, focus where it should be head on, spot on the eyes. As you know it is the DOF that gives the effect of two halves, but I do not mind this at all. Nice capture.
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Cracking shot Trev, much prefer original background though
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Old 09-10-2010, 21:23   #10
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Much, much better

'Tis a belter of a shot
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Old 09-10-2010, 21:27   #11
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Love the original shot, beautiful focus and the actual shape in flight
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Old 09-10-2010, 21:28   #12
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Nice shot, prefer the 2nd one was this in the wild?
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Old 09-10-2010, 22:21 Thread Starter   #13
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Good BIF shot Trev, focus where it should be head on, spot on the eyes. As you know it is the DOF that gives the effect of two halves, but I do not mind this at all. Nice capture.
Thank you Gordon, yes, I was using f/5, set up for another shot when this chap arrived, hence the small DoF which I also prefer for this shot
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Cracking shot Trev, much prefer original background though
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Much, much better
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Love the original shot, beautiful focus and the actual shape in flight
Thats appreciated Tina, thank you
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Nice shot, prefer the 2nd one was this in the wild?
Thank you Nicki, think I'll stop playing so much with the shots and keep them simple now, I too prefer the original. I was actually after a buzard when this chap came in low and fast.

Thank to everyone for your comments and encouragement, its appreciated very much

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Old 10-10-2010, 07:02   #14
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Thank you Nicki, think I'll stop playing so much with the shots and keep them simple now, I too prefer the original. I was actually after a buzard when this chap came in low and fast.

Thank to everyone for your comments and encouragement, its appreciated very much
Wild or captive?
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Sorry Nicki, I didnt say, this was at a sanctuary/hospital for injured birds of prey. A buzard was flying at the time when this guy joined in.
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Old 10-10-2010, 08:40   #16
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A cracker Trev,prefer the original[my pref],thank you.
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Any chance of seeing it with no PP?
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Lovely shot of the Kestral but judging by the halo around the wings and tail it looks like its been cut out of another image and pasted onto a different b/g.
Probably just a trick of the light.
Great capture
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Any chance of seeing it with no PP?
No prob Ade. I have resized this for the site, small amount of sharpening in RAW that I didnt bother to remove. Other than that is out of the camera.

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Lovely shot of the Kestral but judging by the halo around the wings and tail it looks like its been cut out of another image and pasted onto a different b/g.
Probably just a trick of the light.
Great capture
Thanks, but your wrong there, its absolutely genuine, there isnt a halo as such, what your seeing it the light at the edge of the wing feathers. I took a series of shots and this was the best, your welcome to see the rejects.
Here you go. No PP apart from resizing.





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Nicely caught, but just check the working colour space in your editing software Trev - I think something is set to Adobe RGB rather than sRGB?
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Thanks for putting me firmly in my place.
I did think it was the trick of the light.
Still a great capture

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Thanks for putting me firmly in my place.
I did think it was the trick of the light.
Still a great capture

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Thanks Mike, glad you like it. Hope I replied to your comment politely, no offence ever meant in any way
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Nicely caught, but just check the working colour space in your editing software Trev - I think something is set to Adobe RGB rather than sRGB?
Thank you Cedric, its appreciated. I have gone through all my settings, and yes, the RAW converter from ACR to PS was set to RGB. I hadnt noticed so thanks very much for the advice Maybe I can stop strugling with colours now
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I prefer the original to be honest Trev. I am probably in the minority of one but I do think that a lot of birds are oversharpened on here. Again, just my opinion.

You did well capturing this, well done.........
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Wonderful captures.
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Old 11-10-2010, 11:27   #27
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Thanks Mike, glad you like it. Hope I replied to your comment politely, no offence ever meant in any way
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Masterful, Trev. I love the desaturated background.
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Well captured Trev hope to meet you on Thursday night.
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Good capture Trev and fair play for having a play around in PS. If we dont make mistakes we learn absolutely nothing, well spotted by Ced`s, and Ade is right as there aint a lot wrong with the original.
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