Monika

Good job the only thing is the focus, maybe you could try some burnt paper effect on the lower right to cover up the focus problem. :)
 
I suppose I could have left more of the letter over the hand and flowers, maybe I will try that.

jeff

I'd agree with that, and then the shot would be a great one IMO. Really like the concept and idea behind it, different use of a paper texture from what I'd have though of, nice one (y)
 
What were you trying to achieve? I'm left feeling confused by this. There's also some of the writing left on her face which is very distracting.
 
Like the composition &work carried out on the background & de sat colours, but as said would have liked the hands & flowers to be pin sharp as the eyes here
 
Very cool.
I like it all.
(If anything I would remove the letters from the back of her hand : at another size print they might make her hand look a bit too skeletal.)
 
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