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Real name : Adam
Location: Brands Hatch
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Found an egg
I'm sure egg shots have probably been done to death but I had a few spare hours with nothing to do and the s9600 was feeling neglected.
I know composition could do with improving, please give me some pointers. But it's the lighting I would really like some crit on. I'm still trying to get used to it all. ![]() Untitled by ACW#, on Flickr ![]() Untitled by ACW#, on Flickr Then a random Apple lighting shot: ![]() Untitled by ACW#, on Flickr and the set up I was using for them. They were all on minimum power, and the softboxes had an extra diffusing layer inside them. ![]() Untitled by ACW#, on Flickr Thanks in advance! |
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like this alot. the 1st one is great. the green colour doesn't do it for me.
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Alfie
Real name : Matthew
Location: Warwickshire, UK
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I'm really not sure about this
I love the idea of this I would have liked to see a nice egg yoke yellow somehow that would have fitted in a lot better The colours on this Apple seem a little off, it seems a little dull or flat, I think it needs a good boost in saturation to really make it come alive ![]() Serious set it though Matt MWHCVT
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I do love the first pic and agree with MWHCVT for trying a egg yoke yellow
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Thanks for the comments
, had I had a choice of colours I would have wanted to do a yellow and a blue. Unfortunately all I had was red, green and black food colouring, mixed with a bit of water, glycerin (to try and make it shiny) and flour. I did try using the actual egg yolk but it wasn't yellow enough when spread out and had a horrible film over it which reflected the flash. Ideally I wanted to use a nice glossy paint to get a better sheen on the goo stuff, but I didn't want to go out to the shops so decieded I'd have to make do, next time I'm going to try it that way though. and I'll try giving the Apple a bit of a boost later when I get to the computer, I know what you mean though, it lacks punch. |
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Real name : Allan
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I love the lighting set up and agree with Matt on the colors, I also think yellow would suit better. I you do this again, then get Crayola kids paint (Amazon). It's acrylic and mixes with water very well, I use it all the time for my paint sculptures.
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Nice Adam, agree yellow would be good and wow that is a lot of lighting, but great idea and well shot
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Composition-wise I think the first one is absolutely spot-on and is a lot stronger than the second one. A very creative idea that works very well for me.
As far as lighting goes, I'm no expert, but I think you've got it completely right for the egg shots. Just the right amount of reflection on the coloured goop to stop it looking flat and a nice matt finish on the egg shells. The Apple is left looking a little flat to me though. I think you could have done with slightly harder light in this instance to bring out some of the texture in the skin and add a little reflection to it. |
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Ooooh I like it! I agree with Sarah - the first shot is cracking
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Thanks for the comments
that's the composition I'll use tomorrow when I rest tempt it with yellow. Thinking about using a black background with the yellow paint, really not sure how to light it?What's the best light absorbing black? Apart from material as I think that will be very messy...maybe glossy black card? |
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As you said fabric will be messy, but maybe some matt black paper? |
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Alfie
Real name : Matthew
Location: Warwickshire, UK
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For all mine that you see on a black background I use an A1 sheet of black mount card and find that very good
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And I want to try and get it into an infinity curve but I don't think it's going to be long enough, I'm going to have to PP the line where I improvise and cellotape the two sides together! |
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For a nice matt background, you could try painting a sheet of plastic or acrylic with blackboard paint, that way it would be wipe-able too.
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Great idea love the first pic
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EGGstreamily cool! ; )
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FWIW, I like the red. But then I likes me a bit o' gore.
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I like the egg shots, I was thinking about having a try at this myself.
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