Critique : Fence n' Furrow

robinchun · 03-03-2013, 19:23

From a walk to Hanham Court (Bristol) yesterday afternoon..

Fence n' Furrow by robin chun, on Flickr

Robin

JakeT1992 · 04-03-2013, 08:51

Hi Robin,

I'm sorry but this shot doesn't do much for me.
The fence leads out of the image, so the only bit that the eye is drawn to is a patch of grass and a small muddy trail. Looking further in the otherside of the fence the houses and barn don't make for pleasing subjects. The sky isn't overly interesting either. I don't think any amount of PP could save this one, as the composition just isn't great.

Jake

robinchun · 04-03-2013, 18:27 **Thread Starter**

Jake..Thanks for looking and your comments which have been duly noted

Robin

mrtoad · 05-03-2013, 14:10

and houses
its a pity we can make our camera see what our brains see with all its emotive and compensating qualities
its a stark reminder that if its there the sensor will pick it up
cheers
geof

03-03-2013, 19:23	#1
robinchun Been here a while Real name : Robin Location: Bristol, England Posts: 400 Camera: Nikon D3100	Fence n' Furrow From a walk to Hanham Court (Bristol) yesterday afternoon.. Fence n' Furrow by robin chun, on Flickr Robin __________________ http://www.robinchun.com

04-03-2013, 08:51	#2
JakeT1992 Feet under the table Real name : Jake Location: Swindon, Wiltshire Posts: 2,709 Camera: Canon EOS 5D MkIII	Hi Robin, I'm sorry but this shot doesn't do much for me. The fence leads out of the image, so the only bit that the eye is drawn to is a patch of grass and a small muddy trail. Looking further in the otherside of the fence the houses and barn don't make for pleasing subjects. The sky isn't overly interesting either. I don't think any amount of PP could save this one, as the composition just isn't great. Jake __________________ Flickr Please like my page on Facebook! My 365 challenge 2013!!

05-03-2013, 14:10	#4
mrtoad Growing roots Real name : Geof Location: southwest cornwall Posts: 11,185 Camera: Lumix G1 micro 4/3	and houses its a pity we can make our camera see what our brains see with all its emotive and compensating qualities its a stark reminder that if its there the sensor will pick it up cheers geof __________________ Lumix G1 - 14-45 Zoom Lumix FZ7 - 12x Zoom “Would I were with him, wheresome'er he is, either in heaven or in hell ...Henry V

04-03-2013, 18:27 Thread Starter	#3
robinchun Been here a while Real name : Robin Location: Bristol, England Posts: 400 Camera: Nikon D3100	Jake..Thanks for looking and your comments which have been duly noted Robin