Critique : London Night Shots

beercan · 03-03-2013, 22:51

Hi all,
I managed to get up to London again last week so took the chance to take a few shots.
Looking for any feedback on how these could be improved please?
What works/doesn't work etc?

Thank you for looking!

*Image sizes increased to enable better feedback.*

And here's something a little different from the rest...

JakeT1992 · 04-03-2013, 08:59

Bigger images would be easier to give crit on. Is a nice set, for me the first and the last work best, however I feel the highlights need pulling back as the area around Westminster looks very bright.

furq · 04-03-2013, 14:13

Was going to say the same about Westminster.

Also, I like the framing of the second shot.

beercan · 04-03-2013, 20:07 **Thread Starter**

Thanks guys, I have increased the size of the images and will look at the highlights on Westminster.

Regards

mrtoad · 05-03-2013, 14:12

2 strikes me as being the best and most well composed with wing interests leading to the main event
the only centrally themed shot i have liked so far
cheers
geof

beercan · 05-03-2013, 19:57 **Thread Starter**

I have edited Westminster and toned the lights down a little.
Is this better?

Regards

JakeT1992 · 05-03-2013, 22:29

That's miles better mate!

sebct · 05-03-2013, 22:39

I really like number 2! I'd also be interested in seeing the last one in colour perhaps?

03-03-2013, 22:51	#1
beercan Getting Comfy Real name : Steve Location: Devon Posts: 161 Camera: Nikon D90	London Night Shots Hi all, I managed to get up to London again last week so took the chance to take a few shots. Looking for any feedback on how these could be improved please? What works/doesn't work etc? Thank you for looking! Image sizes increased to enable better feedback. And here's something a little different from the rest... __________________ Nikon D90, Nikkor 28-105 f/3.5-4.5 D; Nikon 18-55 (kit); Sigma 70-300 f/4-5.6 D. Last edited by beercan; 05-03-2013 at 19:57.

04-03-2013, 08:59	#2
JakeT1992 Feet under the table Real name : Jake Location: Swindon, Wiltshire Posts: 2,727 Camera: Canon EOS 5D MkIII	Bigger images would be easier to give crit on. Is a nice set, for me the first and the last work best, however I feel the highlights need pulling back as the area around Westminster looks very bright. __________________ Flickr Please like my page on Facebook! My 365 challenge 2013!!

05-03-2013, 14:12	#5
mrtoad Growing roots Real name : Geof Location: southwest cornwall Posts: 11,190 Camera: Lumix G1 micro 4/3	2 strikes me as being the best and most well composed with wing interests leading to the main event the only centrally themed shot i have liked so far cheers geof __________________ Lumix G1 - 14-45 Zoom Lumix FZ7 - 12x Zoom “Would I were with him, wheresome'er he is, either in heaven or in hell ...Henry V

04-03-2013, 14:13	#3
furq Been here a while Posts: 282	Was going to say the same about Westminster. Also, I like the framing of the second shot.

04-03-2013, 20:07 Thread Starter	#4
beercan Getting Comfy Real name : Steve Location: Devon Posts: 161 Camera: Nikon D90	Thanks guys, I have increased the size of the images and will look at the highlights on Westminster. Regards

05-03-2013, 19:57 Thread Starter	#6
beercan Getting Comfy Real name : Steve Location: Devon Posts: 161 Camera: Nikon D90	I have edited Westminster and toned the lights down a little. Is this better? Regards

05-03-2013, 22:29	#7
JakeT1992 Feet under the table Real name : Jake Location: Swindon, Wiltshire Posts: 2,727 Camera: Canon EOS 5D MkIII	That's miles better mate!

05-03-2013, 22:39	#8
sebct Quite Chatty Real name : Sebastian Location: Berkshire Posts: 60 Camera: Canon 5D Mark III	I really like number 2! I'd also be interested in seeing the last one in colour perhaps?