Critique : Humber Bridge - Hessle end.

bigrich · 04-03-2013, 20:57

Hi

feedback welcome, please bear in mind I'm very much an amature, but loving it!!
1

Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr

2

Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr

3

Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr

I'd especially like to know what I can have done to get shot 2 better?

Thanks!

Mardybum · 04-03-2013, 21:07

Good shots here Rich, #1&3 for me with 3 being the stand out image, I love night time photography. I'm not sure about number 2, a bit more detail in the foreground area would make it a better shot imo??

Good work.

JakeT1992 · 05-03-2013, 13:40

Hi Rich, good shots with nice composition. 3 stands out for me by a mile! Lovely capture, can you clone the sign pole out?
The first two I think would have both benifited with two exposures being taken. One for the sky, and the other for the FG, to balance everything out!

mrtoad · 05-03-2013, 14:24

2 is better as the bridge doesnt exhute rivets and bolts
the boat adds the maritime feel and in itself benefits from the over mantle of the structure

i am on battery here in the library and it says 30% left, but 2 does look as if it could use a bit of a 'lift' seeming dark to me
cheers
geof

JakeT1992 · 05-03-2013, 14:52

Forgot to add, those horizons are wonky!

Big Nick · 05-03-2013, 17:14

Loving no 3 mate

bigrich · 05-03-2013, 17:21 **Thread Starter**

yeah. i should have tidied the horizons up... these were taken just before christmas so a little bit old.

thanks for your feedback all!!

04-03-2013, 21:07	#2
Mardybum Been here a while Real name : Rich Robson Location: Leeds UK Posts: 347 Camera: Canon EOS400d	Good shots here Rich, #1&3 for me with 3 being the stand out image, I love night time photography. I'm not sure about number 2, a bit more detail in the foreground area would make it a better shot imo?? Good work. __________________ http://www.flickr.com/photos/89651923@N02/ http://www.facebook.com/rich.robson

05-03-2013, 13:40	#3
JakeT1992 Feet under the table Real name : Jake Location: Swindon, Wiltshire Posts: 2,726 Camera: Canon EOS 5D MkIII	Hi Rich, good shots with nice composition. 3 stands out for me by a mile! Lovely capture, can you clone the sign pole out? The first two I think would have both benifited with two exposures being taken. One for the sky, and the other for the FG, to balance everything out! __________________ Flickr Please like my page on Facebook! My 365 challenge 2013!!

05-03-2013, 14:24	#4
mrtoad Growing roots Real name : Geof Location: southwest cornwall Posts: 11,190 Camera: Lumix G1 micro 4/3	2 is better as the bridge doesnt exhute rivets and bolts the boat adds the maritime feel and in itself benefits from the over mantle of the structure i am on battery here in the library and it says 30% left, but 2 does look as if it could use a bit of a 'lift' seeming dark to me cheers geof __________________ Lumix G1 - 14-45 Zoom Lumix FZ7 - 12x Zoom “Would I were with him, wheresome'er he is, either in heaven or in hell ...Henry V Last edited by mrtoad; 05-03-2013 at 14:27.

04-03-2013, 20:57	#1
bigrich New here Real name : richard Location: south yorkshire Posts: 13	Humber Bridge - Hessle end. Hi feedback welcome, please bear in mind I'm very much an amature, but loving it!! 1 Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr 2 Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr 3 Humber Bridge by Richard Gaynor, on Flickr I'd especially like to know what I can have done to get shot 2 better? Thanks!

05-03-2013, 14:52	#5
JakeT1992 Feet under the table Real name : Jake Location: Swindon, Wiltshire Posts: 2,726 Camera: Canon EOS 5D MkIII	Forgot to add, those horizons are wonky!

05-03-2013, 17:14	#6
Big Nick Getting Comfy Location: North Yorkshire Posts: 181 Camera: Nikon D3100	Loving no 3 mate

05-03-2013, 17:21 Thread Starter	#7
bigrich New here Real name : richard Location: south yorkshire Posts: 13	yeah. i should have tidied the horizons up... these were taken just before christmas so a little bit old. thanks for your feedback all!!