Critique A few from Vietnam

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We just got back from our honeymoon in Vietnam, which was absolutely amazing, and I of course took plenty of photos.

Would love to hear what people think and any constructive criticism of how I could've made these shots better.

Hoi An
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View from the train to Da Nang
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Playing on Whale Island
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Hoi An at night
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Whale Island Gecko
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Whale Island Sunset
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Cai Rang Floating Market
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Mekong boat tour
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Still have another weeks worth of photos to go through, Ha Long bay was stunning.
 
Looks like a great place.
Consider adjusting colour, saturation etc and the need for the odd crop. The kiddy shot is nice, lots of potential there, you have some nice lead in perspective lines with the wooden uprights on the left and the adults on the right. Here is an example. Hope you don't mind:


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whale island speaks well out of the group
for me
cheers
geof
 
Thanks both.

I really like the b&w crop. One of the areas I fall down in is failing to spot what would make a good B&W conversion. I'll have a play myself later.

The sunset over Whale Island is I think one of my favourite from the whole trip. Not just from a visual point of view, but as a memory of how idyllic that place was.
 
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