A Simple Swan

[ChrisHeathcote]

I was looking through some of my pics from earlier in the year and found this that I had marked under the "meh" category, so I thought I'd re-edit and see what I thought. i actually quite like the colours and detail now so thought I'd share. Feel free to leave any feedback or critique. Thanks in advance.

GF0A9585.jpg by Chris Heathcote, on Flickr

 

[Rigu]

I wouldn't call it 'meh' at all, nicely defined around the eye.

 

[TimmyG]

Yep nicely detailed, I think I would lose a thin slither off the left (maybe even a square crop with a slight anti-clockwise rotation). The vignetting looks a bit overdone to me, so I would back off on that a bit.

 

[ChrisHeathcote]

Thanks for the feedback.

Tim, Looking again now I agree on the vignette, it looks darker on here for some reason than it does in LR. Don't know why.