broken heart (of a car)

[lexie]

i got my first dslr last week and i've been seeking out interesting locations and subject matters. i found this in a wood yard i pass most days and went for nosey earlier today, it turned up some interesting shots but this is my favourite.

sony a390 with 18-55mm
f/4.5
1/80 sec.
iso 200
focal length 39mm

all criticism is whole heartedly welcomed.

 

[moomike]

I'd have added a tad more space at the bottom of the frame & possibly dropped the exposure a tiny bit to make it darker/grittier but it definitely shows potential imo

Congratulations on getting the new camera mate

 

[artyman]

A wipe with an oily rag and some WD40 and it'll be fine

 

[lexie]

I'd have added a tad more space at the bottom of the frame & possibly dropped the exposure a tiny bit to make it darker/grittier but it definitely shows potential imo

Congratulations on getting the new camera mate

i realised that after i posted the image, it was a quick pic on the way out as i was in a hurry at the time. if it's still there next time i pass i'll maybe try it again and try to improve the composition. i'm still new to this, but as they say - it's a steep learning curve.

thanks for the constructive citicism dude, it's just what i'm looking for.

 

[lexie]

A wipe with an oily rag and some WD40 and it'll be fine