charlotte

[ed34]

Hi All,

i haven't posted a shot for quick some time,so i thought i'd make an effort and post one.and here it is.

it was taken last year on our family holiday in tenby.

btw the shot is of my daughter charlotte,she's 9 years old in this photo.

hope you like,if not tell me how i can improve the shot.

thanks sean

 

[b_1_rd]

I like it Sean. Definitely a keeper.

 

[ChrisMClark]

A keeper it is, the only point I'd raise is that I'd like maybe a little less air above her head, it looks a little odd with how tight the rest of the framing is.

Still a lovely shot though

 

[ed34]

thanks for the comments guys

sean

 

[Betty]

Crop it a bit tighter, then its a keeper

 

[ChrisMClark]

Crop it a bit tighter, then its a keeper

Great minds think alike Must be an east mids thing

 

[ed34]

thanks betty

is this crop any better?

sean

 

[ShawWellPete]

much better

 

[Scotty B]

The crop makes an great shot.

 

[ed34]

The crop makes an great shot.

thank you

much better

thank you

sean

 

[..MD..]

Very nice eddy boy

she is growing so fast..

I liked the 1st with the space but also like the crop. I suppose if its a shot for print then the 2nd would be better. If it was a shot for a canvas then the 1st would be better.

So it all depends what the shot was for

seriously though mate other than " less wind " and her hair combed it looks fine imho


md/.

 

[purpleclouds]

Nothing wrong with that! In fact, I quite like it!

 

[The_Bulb]

I agree the cropped version is better - really nice image, very natural looking

 

[mehraj]

cropped one is much better.

 

[SuziJ]

Really like the cropped version

 

[ed34]

thanks for all your comments,very much appreciated

i think i might just send this one off to the printers.

thanks again sean