The first one is a lovely pose and has the best low view. I think it could take a bit more contrast and a little boost in the exposure which would take it up a further notch. I had a quick go at a re-edit (it'd look better coming from the original). Let me know if you want me to remove it
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Cheers Mike no you welcome to leave it another pair of eyes always welcome! Now to me yours looks too much on the brightness side although I agree 100% with the contrast side of things! My monitor (macbook air) not calibrated so it would be interesting to see what others think?