Does this work?

[chaz46]

Took this the other day and I am basically trying to decide if its a keeper or not? Honest opinions welcomed

IMG_0258(1) by Charlie_46, on Flickr

Cheers,

Charlie

 

[Gary Wakeley]

For me: Not a keeper

Reason: as a portrait it says nothing to me, its neither mystery or clarity, the eyes are important in portraiture, they are almost non existant in this shot.

Kind regards

Gary

 

[Sir SR]

Hi

For me personally, portraits are usually all about the eyes. Unfortunately they're a bit lost here. Keep at it and look forward to seeing more of your stuff.

Shaheed

 

[chaz46]

Thanks for the feedback folks. Much appreciated. The intention was to lose the eyes in the darkness for something a little more interesting. I will have another go with different lighting.

Cheers.

 

[Sko77y]

Charlie why aren't you smiling? what would Zoe say

 

[chaz46]

Haha Scott didn't realise you were on here! How's things?