Beginner Don't work with animals they say

[Daniel White]

Well I think it's rather good for a beginner, first time using somewhat of a studio. Bedsheet software and flash please c and c

 

[new2me]

That's quite cute. Someone with more studio experience will be more helpful, but i'll just comment on a couple of things

• slightly clipped left paw
• reflection in the right eye is very distracting
• maybe, could do with warming up a little

Cute though

 

[Cobra]

Pretty much as Neil said
I'll just add a little off the LHS of the image so the dog isn't quite so central.
Very cute

 

[Daniel White]

Yeh noticed the clip but this wasn't cropped, as for the reflection right eye I didn't have a soft enough light plus the tortoises vivarium light h
was on, thanks for the critique tho always learning