Critique Easter Karting.

[PBP27]

Decided to spend my weekend following two karting championships instead of venturing to Brands or Silverstone, eager to try out my newly aquired 70-200VRII bought from a fellow TP member, along with my F4 300 (also bought on TP). I now have PLI sorted after a recommendation from Gary also on TP, so I could venture out onto both the circuits that I visited. TP has helped me greatly since I joined up late last year.
Sunday was a washout all day but I stuck with it hoping that it would improve which it didn't ! Anyway here are some photos, I'm still learning big time so any critique is welcomed.

#1 Young lad getting some air.
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Bayford F6. by Paul Babington Photography, on Flickr

#2 Older gentleman getting some air.

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Bayford F6. by Paul Babington Photography, on Flickr

#3 Rain shot with the 70-200

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Buckmore (11) by Paul Babington Photography, on Flickr

#4 Novice Junior driver drifting.


Buckmore (10) by Paul Babington Photography, on Flickr

#5 Reflection.


Buckmore (3) by Paul Babington Photography, on Flickr

 

[suggs]

good effort..

For the first shot i would have put the karts more to the right of the frame and leaving the bend of the
track trailing away in the left corner, although its still a nice shot
#2 again would have a wider crop to include the second kart rather than cutting it in half
#3 clipped the blue karts left wheel, but thats maybe being over critical.
#4 good panning would have been nice with some space to the front of the kart..

just my observations and ive only ever shot karts once some years ago...

 

[PBP27]

Thanks for your comments, the 300 restricted me in the first two to a tightish crop, I was on a sloping bank and couldn't go back any further without falling off, maybe could have used the 70-200 instead.
Good points on the others thanks.