Critique Fair

[cargo]

Went to local fair over the weekend with family "Daisy Nook" Droylsden in Manchester. Took camera along. I guess the photos are snaps really,these were taken candidly as we wandered through the fair and ate chips.I quite liked them though.

All comments are most welcomed.

Gaz
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[Carlh]

A nice set, spoiled with the first image,open mouths does not add anything to a candid-style shot unless they are "shouting or yelling" - it just looks out of place compared to the other good images in this set. Does that make sense?

4 is my favourite - great expression and great photography work on your behalf while being thrown about hahaha, brilliant

A good set overall, just watch for open mouths

 

[cargo]

Hi Carl.
Yes I see what you mean now you pointed it out. I quite liked it at first as I felt it had a kind of spontaneous look/feel to it. Many thanks for giving me some honest feedback/encouragement it's much appreciated.
Gaz

 

[Ulfric M Douglas]

I like "Pay Her", good cropping there.

 

[^Joe]

Yep. A nice set of keepers. I like 2/3 best.

 

[cargo]

I like "Pay Her", good cropping there.

Hiya tbh__I meant to take the full box but managed to compose with the E out of the frame. I cropped a midges off top and bottom in post. Thanks for taking the time to commnet

Yep. A nice set of keepers. I like 2/3 best.

Thank you Joe. Glad I captured the atmoshere of a fair.
Gaz