Double post?
Edit: Good effort! Although I think they may both be a tad under exposed.
Hi Dozy Dave! Great avatar!
Anyway, back to pics. First is def under exposed but great shot otherwise. Do you have Photoshop or similar to post edit? There are some great posts on here that could transform a shot like that in a couple of minutes.
The second just makes me laugh and I'm not sure why?! Good depth of field but would have liked to seen that guy in a more natural background.
Both good shots to be proud of
The spider shot is great,and funny for some reason,the first a tad underexposed,but good nonetheless.
Good start Dave, you are getting down to the subjects level which always makes for a more interesting shot, the 1st does look a little under but easily brought back up in pp. The jumping spiders are normally quite hard to shoot so well done on that one too.