First time model

[Nigey]

I would be really interested to hear what you all think of this?

you have no idea what damage a bottle of fake tan can do to your attempts to colour match her skin!!

 

[Itti]

Nice outfit, but she is slouching and she looks really uncomfortable (it shows in the legs, also a bit in her arm). Try and get her to arrange her legs in a way that feels comfortable for her next time (rather than just telling her where to put them as this can end up with an awkward end position), and then get her to sit up straighter - she will look much more confident with the sitting up straight.

 

[Betty]

This is a very awkward pose, and she looks really uncomfortable. You might say she didnt mind sitting like that, but it shows in your image

 

[Nigey]

Thanks for your comments, but it wasn't really about posing this time, this was the first time she had been in the studio and was really nervous so these were really "test" shots for her to see how she turned out "In Camera". Totally agree about the pose looking uncomfortable though. I am sure she will relax a whole lot more next time though.

 

[James Rothwell]

Get her more relaxed, reassure her that she looks great and get some more.
She looks great and I think with time you'll get some great shots with her.

Why can't I find someone attractive to help me with portrait shots!!