First try with a few flowers.

[matt b]

A friend of mine was after a clean crisp macro shot for a dance track he is doing, so i ended up with a few pics of flowers
Anyway please tell me what you think and feel free to be as harsh as you like.


Flower by matt barton, on Flickr


Flower by matt barton, on Flickr


Flower by matt barton, on Flickr

Thanks for looking.
Matt

 

[Deleted member 34016]

good effort for a 1st try

I like No2, but I would have shot more of the flower centre and loose the boring bit on the right hand side of your image

and also a little sharpening would boost it somewhat

like this-

Les