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Leviathan

Leviathan

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Rich
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Completely new to this - had to fight my way in to get some shots :)

No idea what to think...

Through_the_Trees_by_Engelsman.jpg


Bass_by_Engelsman.jpg


c&c and any advice welcome
 
Not sure about the angle of your picture of Jade. Personally I would have closed down the aperture a stop or was your camera set to iso 200 rather than 100 but it is nevertheless a nice picture.

The white trees shot was on the Blad stand - did you use the Blad or your own camera?
 
I like both shots - well done :)
 
Number one is top!
I have a small problem with gravity on number two - the necklaces seem to be defying it. Perhaps your model could have 'swung' the necklaces to her left to simulate them hanging down a bit...or am I talking complete nonsense?
 
Nice shots. I was there on Monday but not PPd any of my shots yet.
 
I agree, Number one is the shot for me! (y)
 
Thanks for your comments :) If anyone wants to try rotating the second shot to a more... suitable angle then it'd be much appreciated :) I did try and turn it a bit but lost part of the guitar, although saying that - i didn't think to enlarge the canvas and try it...

As for the first - I would like to see the eyes more, any tips to bring them out in photoshop?

Thanks for any help :)

-Rich
 
Love number one. Really nice shot - the sort of thing I'd have loved to have taken.
 
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