Nice car, but I always think that non-race painted road going cars that aren't exotic super cars need something else to give them some punch.
Dramatic backdrops... abandoned factories etc can work, but try for adbandonement as a theme rather than "gone home".
The puddle is a nice touch, but it needs that something else in the background to make it wow.
As I always say in my posts - I make these mistakes myself, I'm just passing on the advice some helpful people give to me! Rather than just saying "nice shots, I wish I had a VX220", which doesn't help much...