I do hope that you don't mind Mark but I'd done an edit of the second photo that you've posted...there is a stunning image to be had from what you posted it just needs a little more editing to bring it out so I've done and edit...
Basically all I've done is just adjust things, I've loaded it into photoshop as if it were a RAW file, not the best thing to do unless it really is but it gives me the tools I needed
I've boosted the exposure in two ways, I've actually increased the exposure by nearly two full stops, and pulled out some detail from the shadows, but in doing this I've also had to counter what would now be large blown highlights so I've dropped the highlights out and also reduced the whites brightness a little..
I've tweaked the contrast and clarity up a small amount and also boosted the vibrancy of the colours to give it the kick that I think the scene needed as there are a lot of different colours there
Cosmetically I've cloned out a couple of very faint dust spots...the aircraft trail and what was I think the only star visible in the scene at that time of dusk..I've also cropped in a little tighter to loose a little of the empty sky..the edged where it wasn't all that interesting and the bottom to loose the little bit of embankment that was visible
If you wish me to remove the edit please just say
Dome and CW edit by
mwhcvt, on Flickr
Matt