More of Stacey

[grumpy69]

Here are some more of stacey that I took last weekend I hope you like them. comments welcome please

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4 This one I was wanting something new, not great I know but I know what I am looking for.

 

[Flashman]

Reckon you've got a lovely model there, grumpy, You've brought out a great smile and she looks very relaxed.

Just a couple of constructives I hope... 1 needs to be pin sharp on the eyes and it just misses the sweet focus. Also, most of them would, I think, benefit from some softer light... particularly 3 with the sharply defined shadow from the on camera flash, some diffusion or bounce would help but taking it off camera would be even better if possible. HTH

 

[grumpy69]

Reckon you've got a lovely model there, grumpy, You've brought out a great smile and she looks very relaxed.

Just a couple of constructives I hope... 1 needs to be pin sharp on the eyes and it just misses the sweet focus. Also, most of them would, I think, benefit from some softer light... particularly 3 with the sharply defined shadow from the on camera flash, some diffusion or bounce would help but taking it off camera would be even better if possible. HTH

Thanks for the pointers Flashman I will try again