not sure either of these work? *new crop added*

[fontmoss]

2 different takes on the same person but after looking at them for a few days im not sure either of them really works? The biggest problem im having is that im not sure why i feel that way which bugs me.

first i havent altered much and second ive played around with but im just not sure ive got anywhere with it. any advice on any aspect of these 2 welcomed, thanks.

 

[..MD..]

i prefer the 2nd out of the 2 but dont feel the water bottle adds anything to it

md

you really do seem to have your own style with alot of your portraits mate.. always a dark feel to them.

 

[fontmoss]

dont feel the water bottle adds anything to it

lol no that doesnt help sadly none of the pics i got of him were without it and tried a few crops but look bit weird without his hands

you really do seem to have your own style with alot of your portraits mate.. always a dark feel to them.

cheers! very kind of you although some would say i just need to buy a flash

 

[fontmoss]

does this look any better?