Critique Robins :-)

nickjohnwatson · 20 Feb 2015

A couple more of the robins from the lakes earlier this week

shame about the white stone next to its feet in the second but we weren't expecting to see these so they were opportunist shots.

Thanks

Nick

BRASH · 20 Feb 2015

The subject in the first looks slightly overexposed and there's an apparent white balance issue as it has a blue tinge to it. Easily fixed tho. The composition is ok ans a nice natural woodland setting.

The second suffers from too sallow a dof imo, it's a tad too full in the frame and the angle of view ain't the greatest, I don't see the stone as an issue.

The over riding problem I have with these as that they are BLOODY ROBINS!!!!

Elmer_fudd25 · 20 Feb 2015

Not sure if its my screen or PP but the first image had a big ghosting problem on my screen.

I can see a second outline of the Robin and the twigs in the foreground.

Its very distracting.

nickjohnwatson · 20 Feb 2015

I think its the screen you are viewing them on, have a look at the bigger one on flickr there's no ghosting

Thanks for the comments

Critique Robins :-)

nickjohnwatson

BRASH

fracster's right hand

Elmer_fudd25

nickjohnwatson