sisters baby!

[oli]

She expected some pretty pro pics but this is all I had to give
... I think they are pretty good but C&C again to improve please!

no.1

no.2

no.3

no.4

no.5

 

[onform]

Nowt wrong with them...maybe eye contact in one...but that's just picky..well done

 

[oli]

Cheers for the kind comment.

I can see your point about eye contact but in the large amount of images I took I think I have a few with eye contact that I haven't uploaded.

Thanks for looking


No comments about the square catchlights then ***

 

[lee]

A good set, the only one I'm not so keen on is number 3 with Dad being out of focus.. I think it may have worked better the other way around so that you could truly see him looking at his child along with any emotion that he may have been showing.

 

[oli]

A good set, the only one I'm not so keen on is number 3 with Dad being out of focus.. I think it may have worked better the other way around so that you could truly see him looking at his child along with any emotion that he may have been showing.

do you know what you are spot on there that i hadn't realised until you mentioned it.

Thanks!

 

[oli]

I decided to add more for more ideas

no. 6

no. 7

no.8

no. 9 my sister's eldest