Critique Some Summer Shots

Hi, main issue for me is the last of detail on the shadows, mainly due to the very bright skies.

In the fist, for example, there is some nice detail and colour on the sky, and a little on the van, but the ground is just a block of black. You could have used a grad filter on the sky that would have enabled you to show detail on the ground. Also, on this one the inclusion of the bin is a real distraction. If you'd got closer or changed your POV you could have removed it.

Cheers.
 
I feel like the first one had a lot of potential, but you should have gotten closer up to the van to really show off the reflections, and to make that the main component. You could have also given it the idea of the van looking out to sea, enjoying the view
 
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