Critique third attempt at an eye

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This is my third attempt at doing a eye I know the focus is a little soft but wanted to get opinions more on the pp and if I've gone too far

 
I really like it, personally I would have cropped a bit more off the right hand side of the image.
 
Still like the idea but, for me, it looks like the skin is tinted the same colour as the eye and so the impact is not as good or as great
 
The bottom left of iris is blue instead of matching the rest. Minor issue on an otherwise good PP IMHO
 
I like the eye itself and i have no problem with the coloured iris, i'm not so keen on the purple around the whole edge of the photo tho, i'd probably get rid of the whole right side as it makes it look a little messy... (y)
 
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