Water droplets

[Ally]

I took this a while back can't figure out why I never put it up

 

[InaGlo]

I really love droplet shots, but sorry to say this one doesnt quite do it for me due to that OF leaf dominating the foreground, and which is made more prominent by the short wide crop.
Been playing myself this week with droplets on spider webs but nothing to show for it, tut!
If I were you Id have another crack at this because I think youre almost there.

 

[Forbiddenbiker]

I agree with Glo, it doesn't work with that big fat oof bit in front.....impressive focus otherwise.

 

[daveyuk]

I'm with the others sorry mate but the large foreground OOF really is just to much. However I do like the right hand side detail and the fact you've made this a B&W image rather than colour.

Please forgive me but I had to do it as you've got IMO two very nice images waiting to brought out.
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I hope you don't mind my edit

 

[Ally]

Nice edits! I've never looked at these like that I'm shocked people don't like it I would say it is one of the best shots I've takin, but everybodys view is diffrent

 

[Sean_Mcr]

Doesn't work for me i'm sorry, the negative space overpowers rarther then compliments the main subject (positive space). Not enough focus, and i mean on the subject, not with a lens.

Sorry

 

[Ally]

Thanks for all the comments guys I would rather someone gave there onest feedback about something than saying "ya thats awsome" - that doesn't help us improve.