Critique Wedding Photography Portfolio Update

Hi Shane,

I like all of the technical side of your pics, I would consider pulling a few where the expressions on subjects faces could be better (the 4th picture in the guy's eyes look a bit closed-even though they're not. In the 7th picture the guy looks disinterested). Great overall.
 
first off, you have some crackers in there.
I would say there is too many images though - 24 images is considered a good amount to show your style and technique. Use the front page slideshow to show off your best work, locations. and use the 'wedding' tab to show off the rest of your portfolio
There is also a few random shots that should be taken out - the butterfly for example. The guy leaping with the bride punching the air, I would clone out the lamppost and the thing on the floor.
The first image is not your strongest - I would put my best work first, and finish with my second best

All this input is my opinion and give as requested, no offence is meant Shane.
 
Back
Top