Critique Window Light Tammy

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Been really trying to practice without strobes and am loving the experience. These are a few shots from today with Tammy 'sleeping'. Exposure was pretty much spot on in camera, so am pleased with that. I'm still experimenting with framing, but hopefully these aren't too bad.

The floating hand/arm in #1 is bugging me but the image looks so dreamy I'm hoping it won't matter too much! Wider angle is in #3...

#2 is slightly warmer - the sun came out and changed the light a bit...

Would love to know what you guys think?


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Looks like great light to me.I prefer themiddle photos myself but there all very good :)

Gaz
 
The second looks horribly orange. None of them do much for someone who doesn't know the person pictured, and with that consideration the first is too tightly cropped. Thus the third is the most natural. But even that looks unnaturally processed, and there isn't too much for the itinerant obsever to engage with. The closed eyes are very seemly, as are the lighting and composition, but there's not really much to grab hold of, emotionally.
 
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