Critique Canoes at Sunset

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• 15 Apr 2015

• #1

Was actually more interested in the sunset and the reflections, when these chaps canoed past...

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• 18 Apr 2015

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I like it Mike the canoeists work well in the shot, a shame they weren't on the right of shot, but it works very well. I think they needed space to move into, as they are they seem to have no space on the left hand side to move into.

 

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• 18 Apr 2015

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I think there's a great photo in there somewhere, a sunset with silhouetted canoes in the frame, but if you weren't aware of them coming you wouldn't have had time to prepare as they move through the water quickly.

 

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• 18 Apr 2015

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I did fire off a couple, this might tick more boxes..

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• 18 Apr 2015

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That's the one. It could take a tighter crop to lose some of the foreground but still leave space on the left as Steve suggested but its closer to the picture I hoped to see even though it's not what you were expecting to be photographing. This just shows how a picture can unfold as circumstances change and that the tog needs to keep their eyes open for the changes.