Critique My top 3 from the Legend fires North West stages rally 2016.

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A very murky , cold, wet and windy down down in Fleetwood. I wasn't planning on leaving with any keepers. Still having a confidence issue regarding my images as i just dont think they are " there" yet to getting that positive reaction im wanting to give them myself. Was hoping that by putting them here for you to all see then maybe i can get some feedback to be able to improve.

These have been edited to a style which i quite like so please....thoughts?

Thanks ,

Dave

1) Suzuki Swift by OHaraCreative, on Flickr

2) Impreza orange 2 by OHaraCreative, on Flickr

3) Tony Bardy 1 by OHaraCreative, on Flickr
 
Dave the knockers ill soon be along stating that the cars are static showing no movement PAH to them I say !!!! not a lot wrong with these except in MY mind that the colours are far to bright to the point that they hurt the eyes that's all


Dave
 
Thank you for your comments , i will certainly work on the vibrance and saturation. They don't look to bright on m monitor so maybe i need to adjust it to suit.Yes the conditions were not great especially being right on the prom front.
 
Even though there was a historic rally display on before the cars came onto the stage i was more interested in this! I love this livery and heritage of this car. Unfortuantly now a lot of the Focus's on the rally scene or either the later WRC variants or running Subaru engine's and 4wd systems.
 
The only problem I can find with those is that the poor little Swifty is damaged. :(

Photographically, the colours and vignetting are a little too much but it is down to personal taste. I only say this because I used to use a Saturation, Vibrance and Vingetting to hide technical problems with the photos. Im not saying you are, just that I used to and Im sure others will think the same. The Swift could use more motion but is still a good shot. The Scoob and the Focus are great shots.
 
Thanks for the comment. I will be a bit more aware of the Saturation and vibrancy with future shots. The Vignetting really is because i didn't think there was much to the background so added it to draw the focus more to the car. :) Again something to watch in future shots.
 
Hey, if its your style, its your style. And I agree with that use of Vignetting too, if there is nothing worth looking at elsewhere in the shot, pull they eye to the important bit!
 
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