18 shot Kitesurfing sequence.

great idea...but just doesn't look right to my untrained eye! the legs (and only legs) standing on the beach under the 4/5th stack from the left is odd and the juxta position of the surfer to the roof of the building seems a little odd.

on a massive plus however, you go from Egypt to Sardinia...life is hard!!

Apologies - it is indeed someone bending over.....my mistake!!
 
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great idea...but just doesn't look right to my untrained eye! the legs (and only legs) standing on the beach under the 4/5th stack from the left is odd

I thought that was somebody bending over but could be wrong!

I agree about the overlap with the building roof being unfortunate. How does it look with slightly fewer shots in the stack? It seems a little cramped to me, especially on RHS and towards the middle.
 
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