Just a tip, you may get better engagement if you embed the image, rather than needing to click through. Hope you don't mind, but: DSC_5372 by Mark Hamill, on Flickr DSC_5167 by Mark Hamill, on Flickr
Nice eye contact and engagement in #1, with some great tones across the image, although her face does look a little 'flat' - possibly the models make-up(?!) - a good black and white conversion nonetheless.
Number #2 is stronger for me. Well lit, good composition and lots of added interest with the plane (?).
As a shot of the model I think it is the stronger pic.
No 2 I would prefer more of the aircraft, or the model being smaller in the frame - I'm not keen on half and half but that's just me!
They're perfectly competent but I much prefer some of the colour shots on your flickr feed - they're way more engaging.
fwiw I'm finding your logo somewhat intrusive. Can you tone down the opacity or something?
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