A summer evening on the beach

[alfbranch]

This is probably a fairly common scene on a summer evening on Parton Beach

Summer seas at Parton by Alf Branch, on Flickr

What do you think?

 

[SFTPhotography]

Nice conversion and processing - good simple and effective composition

But I think this could look better in colour

 

[LongLensPhotography]

I agree about colour. Alternatively maybe try a crop to remove most of the sky and focus on that lovely water texture?

 

[Stuart Mc]

Nice that Alf - I'd look at either removing or cloning the dark rock on the right edge of the frame it pulls the eye a fair bit

 

[alfbranch]

Nice conversion and processing - good simple and effective composition

But I think this could look better in colour

Thanks Steve in colour its not great to water is brown due to it being rough (often the way round here) and not much colour came of the sunset.

I agree about colour. Alternatively maybe try a crop to remove most of the sky and focus on that lovely water texture?

Thanks I was wondering about cropping more sky

Nice that Alf - I'd look at either removing or cloning the dark rock on the right edge of the frame it pulls the eye a fair bit

Thanks Stuart
I spotted that dark rock after posting it and was wondering when it would be mentioned