Critique Abarth 500

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Hello Guys

I recently got the chance to shoot an Abarth 500, a car which i have wanted to shoot for a while now.

shame the weather was really gloomy

Here are the shots.

1)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

2)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

3)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

4)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

5)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

6)
Fiat 500 Abarth by Michael Hamilton, on Flickr

Please let me know what you think.

Mike
 
Personal view,
Don't like the clutter in the background of 2 & 4
Would prefer a bit of movement in 5, assuming it is being driven?
Like 1, 3 & 6.

Like the number plate, was that intentional or just a fluke?

Matt
 
MatBin said:
Personal view,
Don't like the clutter in the background of 2 & 4
Would prefer a bit of movement in 5, assuming it is being driven?
Like 1, 3 & 6.

Like the number plate, was that intentional or just a fluke?

Matt
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Thanks,

i cleared down as much clutter in these shots as i could, some bits were just to tricky to remove.

5 - this is a stationary shot

the number plate is the cars actual plate
 
1 is a fantastic shot, well done. I do agree though about the clutter in 2 and 4, the location just doesn't seem quite right perhaps? Well executed otherwise.
 
My favourite is the last one, just seems so appropriate for the little car to be photographed in a gritty environment.
 
Number 3 for me.
Fast moving train behind the stationary car looks great. Nice image.
Number 1 also a cracking shot.
 
No 1 for me, I actually like the weather in that shot as it adds a bit off drama
 
The rig shot is lovely, if anything you could have polarised the windscreen for a shot and blended so its not a reflection of sky on it. Otherwise great. The rest don't really do much for me - its either the compositions and where the neg. space is in the frame e.g. for the last shot put the car to the right side of frame - or its distractions like the train door above the car,
 
I like them all but love #1, with you giving permission to edit I have tinkered with #2 & #3 so if your interested PM me your email and I will pop them in my DB.
 
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