The rendition of red and green looks good and the technical capture appears to have been done well - though it doesn't appeal to my artistic nature.
Yes, the technical side of it is quite well grounded but
the rendition is too deadly right… lacks romance!
I can understand where you both are coming from but I didn't really have an overly artistic aim when I did this. I was playing with stacking at the time concentrating as you say on the technical side of things. This was one of my better results although I guess it came out rather clinical in retrospect.