How about this crop then? Much tighter, and with the left eye on the inter-section of thirds. Personally, I think I prefer this tighter crop.
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I think I prefer that. I'd reshoot it though... cropping loses quality. Do you know the model... can you get her back in?
lol.....the original is just 50 million pixels on a 5DS....I don't think that will be required! However I do think the substantial re-sizing has made it look slightly soft. Something to bear in mind.