You Liar!!!
....get me all worked up and then.... (goes of mumbling, again!)
Seriously, though, I like the hawk, but to me it looks too flat. I'm not sure if there is anything you can do about this since it appears to be a drab & grey day. If it were bright and sunny, I think it would have translated through to the photo well. Maybe there is some sort of post-processing magic you could pull of, but I'm no magician so I can't really help.