How much better would that be with a bit of human interaction? Find someone with a nice set of fingers (pref female) and get a finger or two on the keyboard.
It's technically OK but this sort of thing leaves me cold - where's the human element in all of this? What are you trying to say? What point are you trying to make?
If it's just an exercise in composition and lighting, then fine - but if you want your images to be more than this you have to ask yourself what it is you're trying to achieve with each image.
Tell a story with your images.