Bognor Regis Sunset Critique

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Hi there!

I took these pictures on Tuesday night at my local beach in Bognor Regis. I have post processed them purely in Lightroom. I am open to critique on them, my aim was to get down there for some long exposure shots but I can never get the hang of it. I have a new Tokina 11-16mm lens which I used here and none of my filters obviously fit!

Bognor Beach 09/02/16 by Dan Smith, on Flickr

Bognor Beach 09/02/16 by Dan Smith, on Flickr

Thank you for looking!
 
Very nice shots but a bit too much blue for my liking I'm afraid. Maybe a B&W rendition would be good.
 
Giblets said:
Very nice shots but a bit too much blue for my liking I'm afraid. Maybe a B&W rendition would be good.
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Thank you for commenting. I rarely think about B&W to be honest and it's something I must do more often!
 
I'm no expert, but the potential is there for a really cool shot. Like Giblets, just a bit too much blue for me...
 
Thank you all for the feedback! I need to focus more on my composition in general I think because some times I just get lost in the sky!
 
Daniel, out of interest is that down near Aldwick? Looks like Selsey Bill in the background.
 
Giblets said:
Daniel, out of interest is that down near Aldwick? Looks like Selsey Bill in the background.
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It's right down opposite the West Park field on Marine Drive!
 
Are the footprints there on purpose as to me they spoil it. I would have also tried to take the shot from the rocks over on the left nearer the breakwater to see what it was like.
You should tone the blue down a bit. You can try B&W but you will lose the nice colours of the sun behind the clouds which gives the pleasure in this photo.

Pete
 
I do like all, quite nice, though I would turn down the saturation on the blue on the bottom half of the photo as it looks like it has a blue cast all over from the PP
 
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