Cafe Portraits - Critique Welcome

[AndyBob09]

Hello all, I've recently been shooting some portraits in some cafes and I'd really like to hear some feedback on them.

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[Phil V]

some really good ideas - but none of them are focussed on the eyes.

 

[Deleted member 34016]

Agreed, the focus lets down the whole set