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Lovely couple came down from Camden today, so I took a few photos and we gave each other our email addresses as I said I`d send the best ones to them. He did offer to pay but I said free of charge. A73 + FE 100mm f2.8.

Daddies Angel by Dave, on Flickr
 
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I'd just crop the bottom third off as it makes it stronger and the pole to the left and orangey/yellow thing to the bottom right are distracting.
 
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Lovely image vibrant and the pose is superb- I would crop out or remove the yellow object bottom right and those posts are a tad distracting too- I am not surprised he'd be happy with
the shot - I would be too

The 100mm f2.8 is a super lens- I use the 90mm f2.8 for macro and it does double as a lovely portrait lens, I may well invest in the 100mm :)

Les :)
 
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I'd just crop the bottom third off as it makes it stronger and the pole to the left and orangey/yellow thing to the bottom right are distracting.

Thank you.
 
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Lovely image vibrant and the pose is superb- I would crop out or remove the yellow object bottom right and those posts are a tad distracting too- I am not surprised he'd be happy with
the shot - I would be too

The 100mm f2.8 is a super lens- I use the 90mm f2.8 for macro and it does double as a lovely portrait lens

Les :)

Thanks Les, it is a lovely lens the 100mm and look forward to using it more.
 
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The second image is stunning love the child’s expression.

Thank you, I have one with the fathers sunglasses off but Camden turned his head at the last second.
 
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